Clairabel
Vlogger
I find my own lack of faith disturbing at times...
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Post by Clairabel on Aug 22, 2013 7:07:09 GMT -5
I feel a little odd posting this, as it's actually the first act/precursor to my main series which will be starting towards the end of the year. Usmaan's Blog is a blog written by a nice, normal student by the name of Usmaan, who originally started writing for unknown reasons as suggested by a friend. He posts about his life at home with his brothers and his mother, and all is well until he starts digging things up about his childhood that he cannot rememeber, and his mother just plain refuses to remember. Soon, a hacker starts leaving mysterious posts on the blog, and Usmaan's life begins to fall apart... It's still going, and will be going for a little while longer - it's set out-of-date but don't let that confuse you. Any feedback is much appreciated!
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TailsTheFox
inHABITed
Slenderverse Expert
I don´t have to like everything
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Post by TailsTheFox on Aug 22, 2013 10:25:26 GMT -5
Wow, this blog has an interesting start so far, i think i will continue reading it Well done Claire^^ The only flaw i see so far is that there is no direct "timelne" so that you have to click back through the entire blog so you can find the start of it. But overall it´s very interesting and well done
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Clairabel
Vlogger
I find my own lack of faith disturbing at times...
Posts: 9
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Post by Clairabel on Aug 22, 2013 16:50:38 GMT -5
Thank you! And thanks to your feedback, I've added an archive that goes through the in-game months, so it should be easier to keep up with.
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TailsTheFox
inHABITed
Slenderverse Expert
I don´t have to like everything
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Post by TailsTheFox on Aug 22, 2013 18:42:44 GMT -5
aww thank you very much I´m looking forward to your main series already^^
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Clairabel
Vlogger
I find my own lack of faith disturbing at times...
Posts: 9
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Post by Clairabel on Sept 4, 2013 4:49:46 GMT -5
Thank you! To be honest, I had a small crisis of faith this week, given the size of the project I have in mind and how my life is going right now - but I want to do it, I want to get people scared and excited, so I'm gonna keep it going.
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TailsTheFox
inHABITed
Slenderverse Expert
I don´t have to like everything
Posts: 145
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Post by TailsTheFox on Sept 12, 2013 18:33:46 GMT -5
I´m glad that you will keep it up and that you did not let this small crisis get you. You are strong and have a lot of willpower. <3
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Clairabel
Vlogger
I find my own lack of faith disturbing at times...
Posts: 9
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Post by Clairabel on Feb 10, 2014 12:02:50 GMT -5
Very sad to report that this series has now ended, before I could even get it started properly. Those of you on Tumblr will know this already, but once again I am sorry.
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TailsTheFox
inHABITed
Slenderverse Expert
I don´t have to like everything
Posts: 145
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Post by TailsTheFox on Feb 28, 2014 23:37:11 GMT -5
aww that makes me sad But at least you got another project now :3
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